
Its been a while since I've done figure drawing and when I don't do it for a while I tend to forget my process for doing it. I think I did ok on the first step of drawing, which is a silhouette. It pretty clear and accurate for the most part.
But...I think the first mistake I made was putting in shade and value before getting the drawing right, especially with the face. The face lacks form, as does the rest of the body, and looks concave in places where it shouldn't be. I think one way I could have solved this would be to draw lines around the form of the head before drawing anything else.
There are some nice contrasting values around the head but the overall work is kinda muddy and not showing much contrast between light and dark sides... and the strokes of the background value look icky and inorganic. Plus there are many other things I wish I did different on this.
Soooo....Note to self for my next drawing:
Construction process:
1. Establish appealing and accurate contour drawing/gesture (before moving on!)
-Keep in mind silhouette, rhythm, composition and form
2. Establish core shadows with lines to divide light side from dark side.
3. Fill in dark side and contrasting background values
4. Wipe
5. Highlight brightest areas with an erasure (go AROUND the form)
6. Punch in darkest values (usually eyes, nostrils, lips and some core shadows)